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@ 2009-08-19 19:48:00
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Entry tags:cat and girl, comic, grown-ups, organics, uncorrected proofs

Uncorrected Proofs #8: In Which We Make a Reference


Liz, or [info]we_are_pliable, recently got a job as a baker in the kitchen of her local Earth Fare, and essentially wrote this strip for me when she messaged me saying "MY NEW JOB WORKING FOR HIPPIES HAS A 401(K). MY LIFE IS A CAT AND GIRL STRIP"

If you're unfamiliar with Cat and Girl, I suggest you go and read it here.

I'm getting a little better at this comic strip stuff, I think. I'm still trying to nail down a simple, repeatable style, and there are plenty of tools I still want to learn to use, but it's starting to feel a little more natural. The second panel was originally going to have a little more dialog, but in the end, the joke really sells itself. I do need to get better with confining my panels. Instinctively, I avoid it, but I realize that once I start working, things get sloppy without defined borders.




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[info]vghoul
2009-08-20 03:28 am UTC (link)
Yay!!!!!!!

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[info]been_a_book
2009-08-21 06:52 am UTC (link)
Indeed.

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[info]burningbooks
2009-08-20 12:18 pm UTC (link)
:D

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[info]been_a_book
2009-08-21 06:52 am UTC (link)
:D!

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[info]komoriblue
2009-08-20 12:32 pm UTC (link)
things get sloppy without defined borders.

I do like how you've used the edge of the bookshelf as a border here.

And of course, I also like your Liz XD

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[info]been_a_book
2009-08-21 06:50 am UTC (link)
I need to work with some specifically defined borders for a while. Eventually, I'd like to have the skill that Dresden Codak puts into his fluid comic frames, but he's got the master's touch.

Liz was difficult. Her face changed quite a few times, because I wanted it to look like her, but also because facial expressions ride a fine line between "giddy" and "deranged."

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[info]styossarian
2009-08-20 03:01 pm UTC (link)
Your art, of Liz, as a Cat and Girl strip.

...AWESOME. :D

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[info]been_a_book
2009-08-21 06:51 am UTC (link)
When she messaged me I could already envision it. It translated surprisingly well!

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[info]we_are_pliable
2009-08-21 02:56 pm UTC (link)
Not that surprising, given my affinity and your mad talent.

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